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Barkat Baba

written in Urdu by Dr. Waseem Siddiqi (translated by Dr. Navniit Gandhi) Wednesday, March 14, 2012
Barkat Baba

The entire neighbourhood knew the old and bad-tempered Barkat Baba only too well. Hardly was there anyone in the neighbourhood, with whom Barkat Baba had spoken pleasantly, with the result that people hardly spoke with him nowadays. Consequently, Barkat Baba would remain at home, all by himself, and yet fume with rage on occasions too often. Close to his house, Barkat Baba had a small wood-cutting workshop of his own, where labourers could be seen working fastidiously- as they knew that if they were found idling away, they would have to bear the brunt of Barkat Baba’s ire.

Barkat Baba’s harshness was however, restricted merely to his verbal tirades. Though, when he rebuked and blasted his workers – the impact was no less than if blows were struck on them – yet, the workers preferred to not leave him and continued working for him. This was so, because he paid them better than others did. His workers could have found in their master some other quality worth appreciating too, but his bad temper destroyed all probabilities of that. He was cross with everybody all the time and this prevented others from looking at him in any other way. Barkat Baba was also an ardent hard-liner when it came to religion and over-zealously held on to his fanatic beliefs.

People in his neighbourhood, however, were simple and nice. They hardly ever took offence to Barkat Baba’s outbursts or rude behaviour. If somebody became a victim of his ire, he would simply react with a smile and just let it go. It was probably because everybody sympathised with Barkat Baba. He was old and lonely. Not that Barkat baba had never married or did not have children. Barkat Baba had a wife and children too, but they had all fallen prey to the communal carnage which shook the nation at the time of Partition. Thereafter, he never remarried and immersed himself in his work. The hatred for fellow human-beings ran deep in his heart.

These days, there was some visible change in the mood and behaviour of Barkat Baba. The reason being that a few days ago, a small 4-5 year old boy with a little cricket bat in his hands, happened to run into the vast courtyard of Barkat Baba’s house. The little boy had stood transfixed, gazing at the vast expanse to play in. Barkat Baba too, unlike on other occasions when he would drive the children away, stood staring at Jimmy. The innocence on Jimmy’s child-like face overwhelmed Barkat Baba and left him wondering. Perhaps, the shadows of his past swept across his heart. He then asked Jimmy if he would like to play in the compound. Jimmy nodded eagerly and then it was a different game altogether. Not only was Jimmy seen running about in the vast ground but Barkat Baba too was seen playing with him.

There was no playground in the entire neighbourhood; neither any open space nor wide roads. There were only narrow winding lanes; the only vast space available to play being Barkat Baba’s courtyard but his foul-mouthed outbursts prevented everybody from venturing into his compound. Jimmy was perhaps the only fortunate one who had gotten access to the vast ground. It became a daily ritual then. Every evening, Jimmy would come by himself or with his friends and they would play either hockey or cricket and Barkat Baba would join them in their games.

Every evening, Barkat Baba would eagerly wait for Jimmy to come and if, on any day, the latter would not come – Barkat Baba would pour his anger on the labourers and ask them if they had dared to scold Jimmy, to which the frightened labourers would always reply in the negative. Jimmy was, after all, such a sweet child- they would say in unison. And then on the next day, when Jimmy would come and run towards Barkat Baba and hug him hard, it was obvious that Jimmy too had missed Baba ardently. The outcome of all of this was that Barkat Baba’s ire and anger had almost vanished. He had begun to speak warmly with all his workers, and sometimes shared a laugh with them too. The workers knew this transformation was due to Jimmy and the little boy had become their favourite too.

One day, Jimmy’s bat broke in two and Barkat Baba himself lovingly made another one for him. Jimmy was happy and so grateful that next day, he brought his father along, to meet Barkat Baba. Jimmy’s father thanked Barkat Baba profusely and told him that how initially on coming to the neighbourhood, Jimmy had troubled them as he had no friends. Jimmy’s father had been transferred to that area and unable to afford a house in any other posh locality, Jimmy’s father had chosen to stay there. Now, however, his father pointed out, Jimmy was happy and kept raving about Barkat Baba all day long at home. Jimmy’s father told Barkat Baba that Jimmy was not ready to even go home in his holidays as he would have no ‘Barkat Baba’ there to play with, and on hearing this, Barkat Baba’s delight knew no bounds.

That day it was Holi – the festival of colours. The workers had been given a day off and Barkat Baba sitting alone in his house was pleasantly surprised to see Jimmy walking in quite early that day. He was carrying two bottles of colour and as he was about to pour the same on Barkat Baba that the latter stood up and sternly reprimanded Jimmy saying, ‘ Do Muslims play Holi? It’s only the Hindus who celebrate Holi’. Jimmy’s eyes were filled with tears. Not understanding much about what being a ‘Hindu’ or a ‘Muslim’ meant, he began to sob and replied,’ Everyone at home – Mummy, Daddy, Uncle – is playing Holi, but I told them that I would play with you first and I came over’.

‘What is your father’s name?’, asked Barkat Baba. He realised that the other day while they did speak at length, he had forgotten to ask Jimmy’s father his name. Jimmy hesitated and replied softly, ‘Anil Kumar’. Holding the bottles of colour close to his chest, and with tears streaming down his innocent cheeks, Jimmy began to walk away. Barkat Baba’s reprimand had hurt him immensely. Suddenly, an emotionally-charged voice rang through the air: ‘Wait, Jimmy – my son! Wait’. Barkat Baba could not hold himself back and ran towards Jimmy and hugged him hard. ‘Where are you going, Jimmy? Will you not play Holi with me? ‘, and saying so, Barkat Baba took hold of the bottle from Jimmy and began playfully pouring colour all over the little boy. Jimmy wiped his tear-stained face with his tiny hands and began to jump with joy. In a minute, he had coloured Barkat Baba completely.

In the evening that day, Barkat Baba was savouring the Holi sweets at Anil Kumar’s house and little Jimmy was grinning ear-to-ear as his friend had come home for the first time. He kept insisting with Barkat Baba that he must finish all the sweets, one after the other. Jimmy’s mother, covering her head with her saree, came in to pay her respects to Baba. Barkat Baba blessed her and gave her all his best wishes. And Anil Kumar, while observing old Barkat Baba, was wondering how lonely must he be.

Dr. Waseem Siddqi is a renowned story writer in Urdu and has several publications to his credit. He is an Industrial Hygienist by profession and is a senior member of the Writers’ Forum, Kuwait.

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Navniit Gandhi is an academic since 25+ years; a feature writer (300+ articles), and has authored 10 books. Her 10th and most recently authored, published and launched book is titled: NOT MUCH IS AS IT SEEMS Her write-ups can be read at navniitspeaks.wordpress.com
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Javaid
Wednesday, May 2, 2012
Very touching story.

shahjahan Jaffery
Saturday, April 21, 2012
Very touchy indeed.It's so pictorious that one feels that the whole thing is happening just before his/her eyes. Barkat baba's character is potraied so well that one can imagine him around. Very well written & equally well translated by Navneet Gandhi.

syed Qamar Minto
Tuesday, April 3, 2012
Really Dr.Waseem Saddiqi is a wonderfull short stories writer, he used his all talent to create something new,God bless him.

baljit singh
Monday, April 2, 2012
very touching and initially while it looked like a long article,could not help reading through every word of it.Its very well presented and keeps us engrossed in it.has awonderful message and brings us all together.The author must have written very mnany more such short stories in Urdu and we need to compliment the person who has brought in the same emotions and feelings in the english writeup as the urdu one would have done.Congratulations and look forward to many more such heart renedering writeups.

M. U. Beg
Thursday, March 29, 2012
Dr. Waseem is well known short story writer hailed from Lucknow, a city of culture & poetry and known for its Ganga-Jamuni tehzeeb. All his stories are simple straightforward and finds direct passage to heart.

Mahum
Thursday, March 29, 2012
Lovely story....enjoyed it in every way....Barkat Baba describes a lovely message that one can be different from the inside,and is not always the same as the outside.A love for a child can be so strong,that nothing can break the force.A child's happiness is so simple to fulfill.Jimmy was happy just by Barkat Baba putting a bit of color on him.The message is so strong and beautiful at the same time.

Shubhankar Dutta
Thursday, March 29, 2012
Very profound thoughts. There is Barkat baba in everyone but not many dares to open their heart due to various reasons. Would love to read more from W---- Baba.

Shubhankar Dutta
Thursday, March 29, 2012
Very profound thoughts. There is Barkat baba in everyone but not many dares to open their heart due to various reasons. Would love to read more from W---- Baba.

Shahid
Wednesday, March 28, 2012
The story "Barkat baba" has big lesson in it. Humanity and love by Barkat baba which is shown in this story is beyong calculation. It is we who have to inculcate these things in ourselves. May Allah give strength to Dr Wasim Siddiqui to write more stories like this and spread love and ahumanity.

Hina Saadi
Tuesday, March 27, 2012
Heart warming story indeed! The story brings out the memories of the barkat baba's in our lives. Children have better abilities of judging others. Looking through a child's eyes, we can all see the real people behind the barkat baba's of our community, our neighborhood, our childhood memories.
Grief oftentimes takes shape of anger and hatred, as observed by our insensitive hearts. But a child can see through the facade!
Very well written!

Husna
Monday, March 26, 2012
A very well written story. In my opinion Dr.Waseem Siddiqi has plotted the article very well. A very touching article. Dr.Navniit Gandhi has translated it exceptionally well. Both the Urdu and English versions were very enjoyable.

nadeem
Monday, March 26, 2012
I have read the urdu version and a big fan of Dr Siddiqi's writing. No emotions lost in english, Dr. Navniit Gandhi has done an excelent job in keeping all the emotions. It will be so good if we all start celebrating every religions festivities like barkat Baba, after all every religion preaches goodness.

Rose
Sunday, March 25, 2012
Loved the story. It conveys how, at core, we're all human and share fundamental human traits. Barkat Baba, a reclusive, choleric and cynical old man, was in his old age, drawn to Jimmy. Not only had he never anticipated that he would grow so attached to the child, but he never dreamt that his deep-seated prejudices would ever dissolve away. On learning that Jimmy is hindu child (or from a hindu family) he realises that he would not have been able to distinguish Jimmy from any other muslim child. Jimmy posesses the qualities which are in endearing uin all children, and quite effortlessly manages to do what no one else though possible, generate some love in this bitter old man's heart, and confound his prejudices. lovely story.

Uzma Hameed
Saturday, March 24, 2012
such a fine piece of article, very touchy and heartfelt... pulls at the heart strings...the inherent goodness in every human being is subtlely bought forward by the author.... the story evokes mixed emotions about how a child's innocence can not only change the behaviour of the toughest of human beings but can also bring flexibility in his long acquired principles( this is clearly reflected in Barakat baba willingness to play holi with Jimmi)

Zeba
Friday, March 23, 2012
Very touching story. The writer has portraited that a person looking very tough can be changed by the touch of human emotions. Enjoyed thoroughly.

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